Joel : September 2015

Monday, 14 September 2015

My Agument about should we change the new zealand flag

Body of text Introduction State what you are arguing about State your opinion For or Against A flag is something that waves on a pole. It represents a country and identity. Every flag has a meaning. The pattern and design on the flag may represent a culture. Our argument is about changing the New Zealand flag. We are for changing the New Zealand flag. Reason 1 Cultures Supportive details We think that the New Zealand flag should be a Maori pattern to show the culture and history of our country. Maori people lived in New Zealand longer than the English people. New Zealand should have a flag that represents all cultures especially Maori and English. Reason 2 Symbols Supportive details We don’t like the current New Zealand flag because it's too dark and too bright. I don’t know what the Union Jack means it has nothing to do with our country. The Union Jack is a British symbol. We need to have more New Zealand symbols on our flag. Reason 3 Patterns and Voting Supportive details We think that the New Zealand flag should be a koru pattern. Our flag should be a red background with a green koru. If we have a koru on the New Zealand flag then it will be much better. Conclusion I’m for changing the flag because we need a change. The current flag is out of date and needs a makeover. The new flag needs to represent our culture and symbols that make New Zealand a great country.