LI: To Write a Speech that persuades others to think the way you do.
Why the media should stop showcasing violence on the news
Paragraph 1 – Fakalofa Lahi Atu, My name is Joel and I am writing this speech to tell others why the media should stop showcasing violence on the news. In my opinion this has a big affect on us as people which makes it even harder for all of us to move on with our lives. As was recently showcased on T.V this year the Christchurch Terrorist attack has been a shocking moment for all those who have lost someone during the tragedy. As humans we have been given the freedom that we have always wanted , but when casting breaking news on T.V stops us from sharing the moment that we have in this world can cause a major impact on who we are.
Paragraph 2 –
Why is the news broadcasting these inappropriate and brutal videos and reports?
People are unnecessarily worried because of what they have seen & heard and to think about what has been shown people are reacting and are not thinking about what they should do before they made their actions appear.
This is a cautious environment because from my point of view this sounds like a big misunderstanding. From the way they have intimidated others to follow them, This can cause a number of dangers to people's lives, for example it can lead to suicide, protests, schools being shut down and mostly online texting and showcasing.
Paragraph 3 – Are the media making the right decision
to cast these juvenile reports on live TV. Well there are many people out their who have
lost a friend,staff or family member , whether they have died from a serious cause.
These families do not want their hearts broken again because
of the tragedies that are taking place around the world.
Sometimes this can be a warning sign for families but it might
also cause stress and depression.
That's why I am giving this speech today to let the media know
that it's done an over because those who suffer from watching rudeness cannot keep
on listening to this nonsense and we as a people should ask this question too ourselves,
is it OK to feel upset because of this, No, we should fight back
but together we come as one.
We are not the people that are making these changes it is those
who are thought to believe that violence is the right thing to do. Well I'm about to make
that all change with this powerful speech I give today I hope you understand the reasons
why I have chosen this topical issue to convince the people of this world that we can't and we shouldn't let them keep on doing this.
For 3 weeks, in writing we have been producing speeches that talk or convince people about a persuasive topic. For this task I chose to write about why the media should stop showcasing violence on the news. I found this topic interesting because it talks about the changes that people are making and this is caused all through social media and + the news. The powerful words I used helped made my paragraphs more convincing. But the Main point of this part was to hook the reader in and make
people want to think like me. To make the readers want to think like me I also used language features such as, technical words, vocabulary, Organization. The part when i practiced my speech was that I have to be confident show eye contact to the audience and also communicating with other speakers.
The feedback that I would give to myself is- that I have confidence and pride in what I speak for.
The feedfoward- is that I need to work on getting my tenses write so that my speech can be more informal.
