Edited Narrative

haunted night.

The ghost house

One day on a farm there was a child name

James & his Dad & Mum Anthony and Kyle.

They were gardening a plant in the garden. Suddenly a big dark  cloud rises above there house.

 It began raining

Soon James saw something beside the farmhouse it was scary because james didn’t know what it was he got scared & ran to his Mum & Dad “Mum Dad said James i saw a Ghost beside the farmhouse”.

It looked very scary But Mum & Dad didn’t believe him they said “If you joke us again we will lock you in the room for the first time.

Then Lunch Time came it was very warm outside because there were butterflies & bees buzzing all around James & Mum & Dad Looked & saw that James had a head stroke.

& then he saw a ghost again “ahhhhhhhh screamed James i told you Mum & Dad there is ghost in the house.

“what do you mean said Mum & Dad “i mean that there is a hornter  in the house we need to leave right now before we have a problem.

Then when night time rose the sky grew dark & James got scared again  & it was 12:0 clock pm James's had hidden under his bed.

Booooo”said a voice.

“hello is there anybody in my room.

James got scared  it was his cat popcorn.

The  ghost  creeped into james room!!!.

When james was still asleep the ghost had woken him up Oooo “ahhhhhh  yelled James who stepped away from the ghost.

until it was the end of the world.