Evaluation of my animated story
In the context of (Animated stories in the neighbourhood) I will design and produce an animated story for 30-59 years old to be used to things around our tamaki area this relates to communities around panmure and GI. My animated story is currently under construction. Could you please help me by giving me feedback on my conceptual design of my animated story. This helps me finish my animated story.
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Hello Joel,
ReplyDeleteThis looks like it was a fun story to create. Unfortunately, I cannot play your animation. It seems that you have not set up your coding correctly, as the animation doesn't play. Although it does look very entertaining.
- Jack
Greetings Joel,
ReplyDeleteI liked how your characters were very mature for 30- 50 years and over. I think you need to work on adding some speech bubbles. What character did you love the most? Anyways keep up the hard and great work.. :)
Thanks Jack
ReplyDeletefor your positive comment I could fix my animation as goal to get it done.
I think I should correct my coding when creating my animation.
Thanks Chavda
ReplyDeletefor your positive comment I could fix my animation as goal to get it done.
I think I should correct my coding when creating my animation.