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Friday 2 June 2017

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Orientation: One Day Mamma Bear and Baby Bear woke up from a nice sleep they ate what was left over in the cave. Then Mother Bear shook Baby Bear and told Him that they were going fishing.Baby Bear jumped up and was surprised how much He loved going hunting for fish.So Mother Bear and Baby Bear traveled to find a nearby ocean searching for the great's predator they were after for.
Problem: That Mother Bear and Bay Bear found that they were on a steep cliff.So baby bear tricked Mother Bear so that he would jump off the cliff.Baby bear jumped off the steep cliff to dive for fish. Then the ocean started to turn into ice and baby bear was stuck he couldn't get out.
So Mother bear turned around and saw that baby bear despaired
so she looked down and saw that he was stuck in the ice so Mamma Bear roared and jumped off the cliff and broke the ice.
Events: Bear jumped up and was surprised how much He loved going hunting for Fish.
Solution: Then they went fishing for fish again.


1 comment:

  1. kia ora joel my name is wally mei i can see that you have lots of details in your story.

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