Flight of a life time.

Flight of a lifetime

I stared at my brother as he gazed into the night, mother owl flew through the cold gusty breeze.
I glared at the city view which made me have a terrifying feeling,
about what it will be like too fly on the first flight.
I felt the temper of the incoming breeze trying too pull me into the night.
I felt nervous and scared.
I couldn't let my fear overcome myself but after a while
I encouraged myself too drift into the night sky.

I became even more brave when I took the first flight,
I knew that I had faith in myself. I was so frightened before but now I am able to fly on my own.
I searched the forests down below to look for dinner, until I came upon a river.
I was watching fish leaping out of the rough current
as my mouth started to drip with saliva and was making me hungry.
So I leapt and flew to the river to capture my prey until I caught a fish
and flew back to my mother and laid the fish on the branch.

When I finished dinner I felt like the cool breeze lifting my wings up,
so I got ready and took off into the sunset.
Mother owl and brother Owl followed me as we twirled into the colourful sky above.

This week Ms Anderson's writing group had a discussion about writing a narrative. After we finished the discussion Ms Anderson´s writing group talked about using powerful words and synonyms to make the story more hooking to the reader. Then we all went off to write our story. I wrote about myself being a owl and having my first flight. In my story I have written about how I over came that fear with my courage and hope. I hope you enjoy my story about flight of a life time.